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Sailor Fuku by AyakoOtani Sailor Fuku by AyakoOtani
Ayako in her original sailor uniform. ;meow: It's been a while since she has been appeared in it. Being the playful silly girl that she is not only does the school bag she carries hold books and such it doubles as another way to access her hammerspace. On the key chains she has the two star dragon ball, a doll I actually own, and a little Yakko plush. Lazy background is lazy. Please enjoy. :iconpuffsharkplz:

Music: [link] I just couldn't help myself ;P
Ayako me

picture used for meme:[link]
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Well, this time I'll my OC's do the talking. I think they'll say something about this. I'm quite busy doing Algebra Homework right now. So, I'll let them do the talking...

Kurt: Hey, Ayako, nice meeting ya! :D So um, well, for starters, I like what you did to the background, it does represent the sky above, and I like it. The perspective is also good, it just shows that you are really running, with style, that is! The colors you used are excellent. They seem to blend well with the picture; not too bright or dark. The proportion of your body is great, well, except the right leg, if I'm not mistaken. To sum it all, I give it a thumps up! How 'bout you sis?

Alice: Okay, bro, I'll take it from here. :) Let's start with your current apparel, shall we? Okay, about it, it really gives me nostalgia, back to the day when I was studying in elementary school in Japan. It also reminds me of a particular Anime I watch back then too, I forgot what it is, though. The skirt is a bit "short" for my taste, but nevertheless I still like it. That bag you have has a really good affect on you, and I can see that. Your body has a great shape, and the only thing that is not right is your leg, it doesn't have the right proportion. Overall, you did a great job; 4 out of 5, and it also brings back my memories when I was young.
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517NewCreation Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She's amazingly adorable. :aww:

A: * :wave: 's at her* :giggle:
AyakoOtani Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Thank you :D *sorry for the late reply*

A: Yo! :iconcocowaveplz:
517NewCreation Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: *it's okay*

A: Hi~
TheIcedWolf Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
i already mentioned the leg thing in the meme image so ill just talk about how sexy the artwork looks here :meow:

the hair im liking the most, when i saw it on the meme it reminded me of some ort of manga/ anime cover art with the way it was shaded, that goes for all of it, the shirt looks nicely done too, the folds are believable and its again, shaded nice, the skirt look a little like its puffed out then coned itself in a bit? i dunno how to explain but in my eyes it doesnt look like a natural flow, i could be mistaken though, i dont usually see many skirts here since its always arctic in the UK. like i said, keep up the good work hun. *Huggle*

ps: loving that emote there. :iconpuffsharkplz:
AyakoOtani Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
The shading took for flipin' ever, to have you say it looks good makes me so happy :iconhappy-dance-plz:
I forgot to draw in the waist band, and should have cleaned it up a bit more I see what you mean by it not looking natural.

ps::iconpuffsharkplz: was added just for you ^^
TheIcedWolf Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
you put the exra effort in, so its only fair to reward you for you efforts, i really do like how the shading looks on this one ^^

thats fine, we all forget things when drawing, somtimes you focus too much one one thing that you completley forget a few other things. all part of the practice :meow:

then i must thank you again for showing me such an awesome emote *hug* x3
Agetian Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Awww really pretty!! :heart: :aww: A lovely pic of Ayako! :love:
AyakoOtani Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Thank you dear! :love:
Agetian Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
You're very welcome, my dear friend! :aww: :hug:
Mikireikai Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
the folds on the skirt.... eeefffff. *jealous*
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